01x06 - Domination

Episode transcripts for the 2016 TV show "Submission". Aired May 12 - June 16, 2016.
"Submission" follows Ashley leaving a damaged relationship, moving to a small town with her best friend, and her awakening when she discovers the popular erotic novel "sl*ve".
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01x06 - Domination

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Previously on "Submission..."

So you don't strike me as a girl that likes to read smut.

You're Nolan Keats?

Yes. It's my pen name.

I don't believe you.

So is this the new book you have coming out in the fall?

Elliott: Yes.

He's playing you. Hard.

I need you to know that I'm yours.

Elliott: Do you like it?

Ashley: It's incredible.

You're in a situation where there's an abuse of power.

Ashley: You're in a relationship?

Not a relationship.

Why not?

Jules: They're married and I work for both of them.

End it or I'm done.

Maybe there's a way we can fix this.

I'm going to start f*cking both of them.

Oh, f*ck.

I'm getting really tired of you telling me no.

Elliott: I pay you, remember? To find me women.

But you're not worth the hassle anymore.

Give me the keys and get the f*ck out of here.


Match my breath.

Inhale up.


Just let go and in.


Breathe into me.

♪ ♪

[Ashley moans]

♪ ♪


♪ ♪


Oh... Oh...

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Ashley: "He had full possession over me, and I had become a sl*ve to his every need. I lived to be dominated by him."

Are your books based on real life?


Do you think you'll ever write about us?

I'd rather keep that sacred.

This is my favorite part.

"I crave those moments where he would look at me, down on my knees, and know he'd put me there, taught me that, enslaved me to him."

[Dillon on cell phone] The nondisclosure was a nice touch.

[Elliott on cell phone] It sells the story.

"I was an insatiable demon willing to stop at nothing to please him. We had reached the point of no return, and now all I wanted..."

I have to go.


Something came up at work.

A deadline.

Dillon: I bet you didn't see that one coming, did you?

Stop being such a c**t.

You better be careful. I'll send it to her.

I'm sure she would love to know what a manipulative little prick you really are.

What do you want?

Sit down.


Why did you go after her when I told you not to?

Because I don't take orders from anyone.

You do now.

Give me one good reason why I shouldn't just tell her everything?

Because she doesn't deserve it.

Neither did any of the other girls.

Yeah, well, she's different.


How is she so different, Elliott?

She just is.

You don't want to talk, fine.

I'll send the email.

Don't you dare.

Then start talking.

I didn't expect it to go this far.

I was going to end it after the first night, but...

But what?

I got caught up in it, okay?

She was sweet and...

She was a fan girl sucked in by a name.

That's not true.

She could be anybody else, and I wouldn't care what you would tell them about me, but...

But what?

You're in love with her.

What do you want?

I'll do anything.

I'll give you money.

I don't want your money.

Then what do you want?



Loan her to me.

8:00 tomorrow night.

Bring her here.

She doesn't show or leaves early, I tell her everything.

You're f*cking nuts.

And you're terrified.


Threesomes are completely overrated.

I beg to differ.

It didn't go well?

Dude, it was a f*cking nightmare.

What happened?

Men are incapable of pleasing two women at once.

Depends on the man.

Oh, please.

No, it doesn't.

Our bodies are way too complex.

Men can barely handle one of us.

Not true. I once had sex with these two women from my mom's divorced wives club, and they still h*t me up for sex.

You're such a liar.

d*ad serious.

Big tit Melanie Masterson and Roberta Johnson.

How does something like that even go down?

It was the weirdest thing.

So Roberta calls my mom and asked to borrow a card table for this party that she's throwing at her house.

Hi, Rafe.

Hi, Mrs. Johnson.

Why don't you come on in?

Oh, awesome.

So I bring it over to her place and Melanie's there.

She's bl*wing up balloons and shit.

She's wearing this dress that barely covers her tits, and I'm trying not to stare at them, but I can't not stare at them because they're completely hanging out.

And then, out of nowhere, she starts eye-f*cking me, like not even subtly.

And I'm trying to figure out if she wants to f*ck me or if she's f*cking around, because the whole thing feels like a complete set up.

To a really great p*rn.


You think I'm lying?


I swear to God I'm not, okay? So...

Oh, aren't you cute.

Rafe: The next thing I know, Melanie's dragging me into the library, and she starts going down on me.


You really don't believe me.

No, Rafe, it's fine. Keep going.

I really want to find out how this turns into a threesome.

Okay. So Roberta walks in after hearing us messing around, and I think she's just going to start wailing on me, right?

But she takes off her top and jumps in.

On the floor.

Rafe: And the next thing I know, it is just tits and pussies everywhere.


Shove her down on your cock, huh?


You think she looks sexy back there?


Oh, yeah.

Oh, yeah.

Bounce on his face, sweetie.

So good.

♪ ♪

Oh, yes.




Yes. Yeah.

♪ ♪

Rafe: And all three of us came at the exact same time.

Oh, God.

[all moan]

It was a good day.


Have you ever had a threesome?

I have. Why?

Jules is having one and it's complicated.

I don't think she's a fan of sharing.

Sharing gives people perspective.

Or it creates a lot of problems.

♪ ♪

It's funny you bring this up.

Please don't tell me you want to have a threesome.

No, it's not that.

It's something I'm planning for your next task.


And it does involve sharing.

Tomorrow night, I'm going to lend you out to another dominant.

It might give you the perspective that you need.

Okay, um...

What do you mean "loan me out?"

Let me finish.

No. No.

I don't want to be with anybody else.

Me having you submit to someone else is...

Is a no.


No. No other people. Absolutely not.

Listen to me.

I need you to explore this world as much as you possibly can.

I am.

How can you if you're not willing to take risks?

I need to know what you do and do not want...

I don't want this.

Well, I need you to want this.

I've been with many submissives, and they never know what they really want until they experience it.

Hey, it's not all about you.

It's about me and what I need for this relationship to work.

I need to know that you are willing to do anything for me.

I need to have that level of confidence in you.

You don't already?

How can I when you can't just trust me?

But I do. I thought I already showed you that.

Trust is an ongoing thing, Ashley.



I'll do it.

What's this?


I see that.

A few ground rules that I'd like you to follow.

Given that you're an employee of ours, I don't want any of the lines to get blurred, so...

Dude, this is like 26 pages long.

I'm thorough.

Whatever happened to being open and free?

Oh, you'll have complete freedom to do absolutely anything you want within the parameters I set.



Couldn't convince her to come, could you?

She'll be here.

I'm not sure why I need to be here.

In case you want to stop me.

But if you do, I tell her everything.

I won't.

Okay. Then it's all up to her.

But she has to last the entire night.

If she uses her safe word, all bets are off.


What is the safe word, anyway?




For your viewing pleasure.

See you on the other side. [kiss]

♪ ♪
You're late.

What are you doing here?

Elliott didn't tell you?

He didn't tell me it would be you.

Don't look so scared.

I'm not.

I just... I don't understand what's going on.

I'm training to be a dominant, and since I don't have my own submissive, Elliott was kind enough to let me borrow you.

Stand here.

Are you deaf?

Stand here.

When I give you an instruction, you follow it the first time I ask.



Tonight I'm not your roommate.

I'm the b*tch you answer to.



Take off your clothes.


Now climb on to the first row of chains and face me.

Dillon: Do you like pain?

I can take it.

How much can you take?

How much can you give?

♪ ♪

So pretty. [chuckles]

Not even flinching.

I'm just getting started.

Have you ever played with one of these before?

I'll take that as a no.

The trick is to be very, very still.

You don't want me to slip.



I'll go slow at first.

Let's warm you up a little bit, huh?

[chuckles] Gotta ease you in.

I think you like it.





Are you getting wet already?

You are a little slut.

I can see why he likes you.

Have you ever had forced orgasms before?

Do you want me to show you what it is?


Is that intense?

I can turn it up higher, too.


[Ashley moans]



Feeling numb yet?



Now beg for another.


[Ashley moans]

I said beg!

Yes. Yes. [moans]

Is it too much?

No, no, no.

If it's too much for you, Ashley, I understand.

Just say the word and I'll stop. I won't touch.

Do you want to stop? I can stop.

[moans and gasps]

Can I have... another?


This is going to hurt a lot.

Sensitive now, isn't it?

All that blood rushing into your nipples.


You drop these and I'll destroy you.



Taste how wet you are.

I think you like it.

[Ashley moans]

♪ ♪ ♪

Why didn't you tell me it was her?

Would it have mattered?

It might have.

What exactly is your relationship with her?

There is no relationship.

Have you had sex with her?


Are you still?


Of course not.

She worked for me.

I hired her to find me submissives, and occasionally I would allow her to join in on the fun.

But I tired of her very quickly.

I don't want to do anything like that ever again.

You won't have to.

I know you're mine now.

I was always yours.


♪ ♪

I'm going to go.

No. Don't go.

I want you here.

Yeah, but I don't want me here.

Scarlet: What?

Scarlet, I can't do this anymore.

Why not?

I thought you were cool with all this.

I did, too, but apparently I'm not cool with threesomes and I'm not cool with sharing the woman that I love with her husband.

So on that note...


You know if you leave, you can't work for us anymore.

It's in the rulebook.

I wouldn't dream of dishonoring the rulebook, so... I quit.

What are you doing?

Moving out.


I only planned on being here for a few months.

It's been almost a year.

Time to move on.

This doesn't have anything to do with last night, does it?

Why would it be?

Ashley: I don't know.

Look, you're the one that should be all f*cked up, knowing your boyfriend pimped you out to somebody else.

He didn't.


You know, no offense, Dillon, but you know nothing about our relationship.

No, but I know quite a bit about Elliott.

Not as much as I do.

You've known him for a month.

I've spent nearly every day with him for the past year.

Running his errands and getting him women.

Is that all he told you?

I know you two slept together, if that's what you're smiling about.

And I also know you got needy and that's why he ended it.

I wasn't needy. I was frustrated.

Because he didn't love you.

He told me everything, Dillon.

Even about Nolan Keats?


I've known he's Nolan since the day I met him.


Let me show you something.

I have to go to work.

I'll be quick.

What is this?

Just wait.

Elliott: That was delightful.

I know there were other women.

That's not what this is.

Just watch.

Dillon: She was a fun girl.

The nondisclosure was a nice touch.

It sells the story.

You're good. I'll give you that.

Hey, is Nolan Keats aware you're using that name to give women?

Nolan is well aware.

[both laugh]

I'm guessing by your reaction he never told you that.

I thought you knew everything.

No. No, no, no. No, no, no.

He's Nolan Keats. He told me he was.

He gave me a copy of his new book that's coming out in the fall.

How would he have that?

Elliott is Nolan Keats' copy editor, Ashley.

He's been working with Nolan's publisher for years.

Nolan Keats introduced me to Elliott and doesn't even live in Ivy.

Nolan doesn't do interviews and would never talk to a little fan girl.

Elliott is not Nolan Keats.

[cell phone rings]





Woman: You've reached the voicemail of Nolan Keats.

Please leave a message.

Hey, Elliott, it's Dillon.

Listen, I just wanted to call really quickly and thank you for last night.

I know now that I'm definitely not cut out to be a submissive.

But Ashley, on the other hand, she most certainly is.

Unfortunately, I don't think that after this morning she'll be submitting to you anymore because I told her everything.

I guess in a weird way keeping the little Nolan Keats thing a secret felt almost like an act of submission, and as you know quite well, I'm really bad at submission.

I make a far better dominant.

So I showed her the video and explained to her who Nolan Keats really is.

Not because it was the right thing to do, but because it was the ultimate act of domination.

Not just over her, but over you.

I did it! I f*cking ended it!

Where the f*ck is everybody?



Holy shit.

There you go. That'll be $10.

Brewed coffee. 10 bucks. Man.

Is Dillon here?

Excuse me.

No, nobody's here. Dillon's not here. Nobody's here.

Where's Ashley?

Ashley called out sick, Dillon's a no-show, and I have no employees here today, so please get in line.

Wait. Does this mean you're hiring?

Elliott: Ashley.

What are you doing here?


Get out of here.

Let me explain.

Don't come near me.


You're a sociopath.


I don't want to listen to anything you have to say.

Just let me tell you my side. Please!

You played me.


Just like you played everyone else.

You were different.


Because you didn't videotape us f*cking?


You should be locked up.

I was going to tell you.


I was waiting for the right time, okay?

Oh, yeah, 'cause there is no right time to tell someone that their entire relationship is based on a lie.

You know that's not true.

How is that not true?

You've been lying to me since day one.

You sent me his f*cking book as proof...

And you ate up every word of it.

Excuse me?

You wanted to believe I was him.

I had no reason not to.

You just loved the fact that you were dating some sex writer.



♪ ♪

[knock on door]

Hi, Nolan.

♪ ♪
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