01x13 - Bo-Bobo's Rappin' Roller Coaster Ride

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SweetDevilStitch{old version, not correct in this episode}

SpiritofHokutoXX Destroyer Ring{old version, not correct in this episode}

denshousha{old version, not correct in this episode}



Hair Hunters A

-block Base The Märchentic Amusement Park

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-The Märchentic Amusement Park

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-W...Was actually...

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-Hair Hunters A

-block Base!!

A

-block Captain Tokoro Tennosuke

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-Huh? You already knew that? Alright then. {added that and changed to alright then, the option was is that so?}

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-After a harsh fight on the ferris wheel,

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-Bo

-bobo defeated the guardian of the ferris wheel, Fair Riswiel.

Guardian of the Ferris Wheel Fair Riswiel

Send your scenic views on a postcard!

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-And now, to save Tomohiro...

Tomohiro

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-Who's Tomohiro again? {added again}

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-To save Tomohiro... {removed the ...}

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-Bo

-bobo,

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-Heppokomaru,

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-Don Patch,

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-And Beauty split up, {added comma}

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-to look for A

-block Captain Tokoro Tennosuke.

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-By the way, do you eat your tokoroten

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-with mustard or with no mustard? {added with}

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-In case you were wondering, I don't.

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denshousha Katatonia
Not For Sale, Rent, or Auction!

(Get up!) Stand up.

Stop dropping dead all the time,

Come and fly away!

Step on it!

b*mb it!

Go! Go! Tricky Style!

Hurry and hit the gong!

That's the kind of era we're in,

We can't be stopped!

,, Blow! Megaton Puncher!

Fighting Soul! expl*sive Power!

Punch a dent into logic!

Crash b*mb! C'mon, Block Buster!

Let's jet go! Straight down our path!

I'm an up and coming fighter!

(Like a Phatman)

Like a macho man

Push ahead

Really hard

Like a starving wild challenger!

Say what? Bo

-bobo!

Say what? Bo

-bobo!

Say what? Bo

-bobo!

(Get up!) Stand up.

Kutabatte bakkainna

Buttonde ikou janai

Funbatte

b*mber tte

Go! Go! Tricky Style!

Hayaku narase gongu

Konna jidai da ze

Oretachi wa tomerarenai

Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on!

Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on!

Get out!

「, , Blow」 Megaton kyuu puncher

「Fighting Soul」 Yo! Hajikeru power

Bukkowashiteenda joushikitte yatsu wo

Yes come on!

「Crash b*mb」 ittoke Block Buster

「Let's Jet Go」 Waga michi masshigura

Kakeagare faitaa!

(Like a Phatman)

Binbin macho de

Gangan ittoke!

Banban hard na

Ueta Wild Challenger!

Intense Snapshot!



-Hour Amusement Park!

The Mastermind Revealed!

Hippo

"Intense Snapshot!

-Hour Amusement Park! The Hippo Mastermind Revealed!"

Now, where has everyone gone?

I know we did say to split up, but they all left in a hurry...

Come on...

Hey! Get your balloons here! {spelt balloons correctly}

Don't push! Don't push! Here you go. {Doe he say hai at the end as in the word "here"?}

Thank you!

Yokoseyo! Yokoseyo! Yokoseyo! {TL Note: Hand it over! Hand it over!}

TL Note: Hand it over! Hand it over!

Yokoseyo! Yokoseyo!

Jumbo Department Store in Shibuya, Yokoseyo!

{Yokoseyo Department Store} {Yokoseyo Bargain Sale} {World Toy Display} {Paris Collection: Floor }

Jumbo Department Store in Shibuya, Yokoseyo!

Papa, Mama and me. We're all happy! We're all happy! {added . and technically he says Papa first then Mama and should it be mama is opposed to Mama?}

Yoko

-Yoko

-Yoko

-Yoko

-Yokoseyo Department Store!

Our rd Anniversary Sale is now on! {Changed to now on to make it sound like a TV commercial}

President Yokoseyo!

President Yokoseyo

The people's champion, President Yokoseyo!

President Yokoseyo! Three cheers for Yokoseyo!

Thou dog. {splitted lines}

Didst thou know that I doth be a warrior when thou started this riot?

Are you serious?

Then you must be the samurai of Greater Edo...

Hajike Dojo

Indeed. I hath mastered my skills at the Hajike Dojo in Edo...

And my name doth be Patchyama Patchzaemon.

On this occasion,

I hath been given a secret mission from my lord Tokugawa of Edo,

And I hath hastened to Echizen.

And the secret mission I hath spoken of...

There doth be a man who hath secretly kept his eye on my lord Tokugawa.

Bo

-bobo! Don't run off on me without telling me anything!

I found lots of rides over there. You wanna take a look?

Sure. Let's go.

Okay.

For I hath been ordered to subjugate the villain.

And so, I doth be headed for Echizen

Doth thou understand?

That's terrible, huh? {was terreble spelt incorrectly on purpose?}

Such a hackneyed thing is well once in a while.

Ah! A gourd sushi roll! It looks so delicious! I'mma eat it!

Oh. Couldst thou refrain from eating my topknot?

I ask this because that doth be my dinner.

But I'mma dyin' of hunger here!

Whatcha talkin' about? Ya stupid or something?

If ya eat it, you'll be sorry!

Ya get it? Ya get it, moron? {Make it say "Moron" instead of stupid, It sounds funnier}

Wait, wait. What are you doing?

Athletics on the Water

Alright. Let's start with this one.

Monkey Train

The monkey train? Do we really have to? {Make it "Do we really have to?" so it sounds like she's uninterested, Lol}

Wait for me!

Rabbits

Man. Those monkeys weren't anything special.

Alright. Let's go beat up the hippos.

Bro, those hippos are real dangerous! {making the line more of a slang}

Ya chicken?

I hear they keep goldfish in their sacks.

What? Goldfish?

Whatcha lookin' at?

N... Nothing...

Is that so? Well then, excuse me. {added then}

Hey guys! Wait up, will ya!? {flared line}

Okay, Beauty. Let's get on.

That's okay. I'll just watch from over here.

You're not gonna ride it? {Added it}

No.

Ride with me! Come on! Ride with me! Ride with me!

No, I'm fine! {Beauty is saying eiy yo}

Ride with me! Ride with me! Ride with me! Beauty! Ride with me!

The Monkey Train will be leaving shortly.

Well then, I'll just ride it alone. {flared line}

OK, sure. {added OK}

I shall be your guide for today,

My name is Ukiki, Guardian of the Monkey Train.

{Guardian of the Monkey Train Ukiki}

Ukiuki... (Happy)

Ukiuki... (Happy)

Ukiuki... (Happy)

And now, we shall be departing to the wonderful world... {corrected and flared line}

Of monkeys!!!

Such a hackneyed thing is well once in a while.

Young lady, would you like to have a cup of tea with me?

No! {retimed line}

Then how about a movie?

Stop.

I really suck at flirting...

That driver sure did look like a Hair Hunter...

Is Bo

-bobo gonna be alright?

Everyone hold on tight!

Y...your right! Everyone look to your right! {he says right twice and added everyone}

Monkeys. {added everyone}

Everyone look to your left! {added everyone}

Monkeys.

This is no fun!

We're approaching a tunnel!

Tunnel

Huh?

They're not coming out... Why not?

{HAHAHHAHAHA, I did not see this coming at all!}

Bo

-bobo...

Where is Tomohiro?

Why would I tell you?

Fist of the Nose Hair Secret Technique:

Turtle Village Submerged!

So he's not here, either...

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-Meanwhile, Don Patch was... {added was to to make line clearer}

Here, darling. Eat as many as you'd like! {made darling a small d} {Make it "You'd" instead of "You"}

Yakkun

Huh? You don't want any? { I hear him say Huh and splitted line}

But I made them just for you!

Fine then. I'll just eat them all myself. {added then and just and all}

If only Yu was here, he'd be happy to eat them. {Added only}

Yu

That's mine and Yu's keepsake mug! {is it me or is it mine/my as in the possession of his mug or was it part of the Yu and me joke?}

Yu!

It's so full...

So full of memories with Yu...

Yu...

Yu... What's your dream?

U{please time}{There's a letter you and some extra characters, is that the kun part?}

To Become an S

I want to become an S.

It's stupid for a U like me to say that, isn't it?

No, it's not! It's not stupid at all!

You can do it, U! I know you can become an S! {Added I know}

Thank you! That really makes me happy.

U...

I miss you... I miss you so much...

Hey!

Who's that screamin' in my mug!

T...that voice!

U!

U!

You've become a number, U...

Maybe you're not an S, but you still changed.

U!

Attack!

You! How dare you wear shoes in my house!

{Guardian of the Teacups: }

Don't you know that I'm the guardian of the teacups, ? {Huh? Did he say coffee cup?}

U...

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-And so, the love triangle started to turn. {Make it say "Started" instead of "Began"}

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-Yes... Just like the teacups. {added just}

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-Tune in to the second half for the exciting conclusion!

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-Here's a recap of the first half... {added here's a}

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-U became ...

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-Yes... Like a caterpillar transforming into a butterfly. {added turning into a} {Make it say "transforming into"}

You're Patchmi, aren't you?

U...

What's going on, Patchmi?

Were you trying to go back to the way things were?

Don't be so stupid! Why would I even think that? {flared line}

It's fine, you know. {splitted lines and added you know}

We can go back to the way things were.

Thud!

Oh no... I'm wavering...

I know he's deceiving me...

But...

Six!

Thud!

No! What did he just do? What was that? {re

-worded first part of the line}

Seven!

Thud!

Thud!

and ... and ...

I'm sorry, teacher! I can't figure out this problem!

Now, together with me, Patchmi...

Eight.

This is perfect. {flared line}

Yakkun!

Yakkun!

Stop it, you perv! {flared line}

What's wrong, Patchmi?

Now, let's do it together. {Added comma}

Eight.

Eight.

Eight.

Eight.

What the...!? {added ? as it is a question}

S...she turned into a goat!

Goatkichi

Eight! {worth splitting this line or not for the suspense? If you don't like it you can re

-combine the lines again}

Eight! Eight! Eight! {worth splitting this line or not for the suspense?}

N...no way! My charms aren't working on her! {Added on her}

"Oh! If it isn't Goatkichi! What's wrong? What happened?" {Sounds like he's asking questions}

"What was that? Patchmi's in trouble?" {added was that}

"Alright, Goatkichi! Lead me to Patchmi!"

"Patchmi! Where are you, Patchmi?"

Yakkun! I'm right here!

"Hey, Patchmi! You alright?"

"You b*stard! How dare you try to deceive me, Patchmi!" {added me to clarify line}

"You'll pay for this! Prepare yourself!"

JOHNNY!!!

He flew! Johnny flew!

Hey... is our answer, right?

Of course it is! You should be more confident.

Bo

-bobo will deliver our answer soon.

Thanks for waiting!

There he is!

Here is your answer.

?

That's a load of bull! Our answer's !

You moron!

Equals!

Three plus three is eight!

But I'm .

Six!

Six! Six! Six!

Six! Six! Six!

Six! Six!

Six! Six!

Fist of the Nose Hair:

{log a bracket squared plus... Oh screw it}

...Equals !

Eight! Eight! Eight!

Never underestimate the power of math.

Seems like you're having an awfully hard time, Bo

-bobo. {Make it say "An awfully hard time" so it sounds serious and funny"}

If you don't find us soon...

It'll be a horrific day for your friend! {Instead of bad make it say "Horrific", Lol}

Right, Captain?

That's right.

What a nice bath...

What are you doing, Captain?

Oil

-bathing.

Don't be stupid! You're made of tokoroten! {changed to a lunatic} {Make it say "Don't be stupid!"}

Please stop fooling around and get out this instant!

No! You perv!

Bo

-bobo! Please, hurry up!

But where on Earth is... {Added earth}

Tomohiro?

I've become much stronger. {added much}

Idiot! You're wide open!

Prepare yourself!

g*n

It's cheap.

It's cheap. It's cheap.

Goddammit!

I can clearly see his movements. Is it because of my training? {Make it say "I can clearly see his movements"}

Athletics on the Water

So he wasn't here either? {Added ?}

Where should I go next?

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-Meanwhile, Beauty was...

At today's special event... {added to} {Why is there a "To" ? That doesn't even make sense. It's better to use "At" since it goes with the scene}

The Refined Kitty.

Thank you all for coming. {added all}

This cat is very refined and delicate...

So please be quiet during the performance.

And now, introducing... The Refined Kitty!

It's refined... {I was gonna change it to "That's one refined cat." but I take that that kanji says It's refined?}

Haunted House

Here will do.

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-Meanwhile, Bo

-bobo and Don Patch...

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-Defeated the guardian of the roller coaster, Hagechatz Telno,

Guardian of the Roller Coaster:

Hagechaz Telno

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-And were riding the roller coaster.

All you bros and sistas walkin' down the road! {This is the most awkwardest thing I've ever watched!, this has to be a filler but godamn there's some creepy sh*t in this segment}

We're doing this with style, standing firm, standing free

This age echoes from one man's scream

We're the youth born in this turtle company

But we'll make it through with our spirit, our demerit

Is this devotion? Emotion? The turtles are in motion!

We've been livin' in contradiction and we've got an irritation

With the unforgivable, miserable, turtle

-saving life {combined lines and added comma}

So now's the time to stand up! {changed the frames instead of the times as it wasn't timing correctly}

Now's the time to get walking!

Is this devotion? Emotion? The turtles are in motion!

A burgeoning virgin engine in full

-throttle... {this line actually splits in ,so don't know if you needed this splitting or not}

Soko no michi iku niichan neechan

Tsukisusumu style kakuritsu, dokuritsu

Jidai no hankyo hitori no zekkyo

Kono kame shakai ni umareta oretachi wakamono

Soredemo taenuku ore no spirit, demerit

Korette junjou? Seijou? Kame sanjou

Kono mujun no naka de ikiteru bokutachi no iradachi

Yurusenaku yarusenaku kamedasuke jinsei

Saa tachiagaru nara ima

Michi susumu nara ima

Korette junjou? Seijou? Kame sanjou

Rifujinna kifujinna enjinna joutai zenkai

Why a turtle rap? Why a turtle rap?

Why do you think?

Why is it?

Well you see... {sounds like Don Patch and Bo

-bobo are both saying this line}

It's because...

Well you see...

It's because...

{MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE MEKE}

YA SERIOUS!?

YA SERIOUS!?

No way, no way, no way, no way. The truth is... The truth is...

The truth is... The truth is...

Expel the demons!

Spinny

-spin!

That actually hurt! {added actually}

Forget your troubles! Forget your troubles! {changed to your}

Now's my chance!

Pervert sighted! Pervert sighted!

Has a pervert been here lately?

Not one.

Effort

Thank you! I've become confident! {Make it say "Become" instead of "Grown" it sounds better}

Party's over

Party's over!

Don't wanna! Don't wanna!

What am I gonna do about you...

Then I guess I'll play with you until the end! It's a special deal!

I'm so happy! I'm so happy!

We're parallel! We're parallel!

We're parallel!

This time the party's over{FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!}

Oh yeah! {Heard this here}

I was so busy watching the cat show that I lost Bo

-bobo again.

Beauty!

Bo

-bobo! Don Patch!

It's a good thing you're safe. This base is dangerous. {Make it say "That's good you're safe."}

Don't wander off on your own

That's the deal. Let's roll out.

Both of you are covered in scars...

There must have been a fierce battle when I was gone.

Haunted House

Alright. We'll go here next.

Alright.

I don't like haunted houses... Do we really have to?

What are you doing? Stop pushing me! {changed to Stop and pushing}

Don't be such a goody

-two

-shoes!

We didn't come here to have fun! Take this more seriously!

I'm sorry...

Here.

Don't let go! Please don't let go!

Whatever you do, don't let go! Don't let go!

So he is scared.

HEKKUN!!! {That's one scary face}

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-Oh, no! Hekkun...

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-I mean, Heppokomaru... {please split}

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-Has been defeated! What happened in this haunted house? {splitted line}

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-And who is this man who defeated Heppokomaru? {Instead of using "That" use "Who" it sounds better}

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-Actually, I already know what happened! {Added what happens} {Make it "Happened" instead of "Happens"}

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-But you'll have to wait until the next episode!

Happy, happy, I'm always happy...

Where does happiness come from?

I will go to you again today.

Happiness comes suddenly when I'm sleeping.

If you're happy,

show everyone by raising your arms into the air!

Happy, happy, I'm always happy.

I wish that it would never end.

Happy, happy, We are happy!

Because I am loved...

...forever!

se

Shiawase wa dokokara Yattekuru darou yo

yo

Aaaaaa

ru

Ryoute wo agete karada de arawase yo

se

tte

Shiawase shiawase Bokutachi wa shiawase

Soshite aisareru kara

Eien nii

It's terrible! Hekkun's in trouble!

Hekkun! Congratulations on your wedding!

Say what!? {added say}

I'm your bride, Bo

-boko!

Wow, you're pretty! {re

-worded line}

NOT! {removed the ...}

And now we pledge our eternal love...

Just look at Hekkun!

You do not look. You feel.

Honestly, you guys... {wha'ts she saying here?}

Next time on Bobobo

-bo Bo

-bobo:

Wedding at the

(Haunted House

Haunted House

Papa, Mama,

I will be happy

"Wedding at the Haunted House! Papa, Mama, I will be happy."

But Hekkun's in real trouble here! {added here and real}

{This is bit is funny in the next episode}

{And she just looks sleepy there}